It was a scorchingly hot day I was playing football in my grand garden, then suddenly out of nowhere a mysterious yellow portal appeared I was suspicious if my brother big brother but I was wrong, I stepped through and then…
When I woke up hanging from the branch of a collusull tree I leaped back down to the ground Then the sky darkened.Then a large figure was in the distance it
a split second later itcame towards me it had a vicious sword …
Great to see you on the 100 Word Challenge Jonathan. This is an interesting piece. Unfortunately you have not used the prompt that was given. Maybe you could try again next time!
What a wonderful peice of writing.
That is amazing writing jonathan. That is amazing for year 4!
That is amazing writing jonathan. That is amazing for year 4 child !!!
that piece of writing is brilliant!!!! i wish i could write like that